Plot synopsis

We have two main ideas for the plot to our opening, they are as follows:

Plot synopsis A
Character A (a girl) is stalked by character B dressed in black and is followed up a road and into an alleyway. Character A is then attacked by character B in the alleyway and killed. The scene then changes to a panorama of a city/town as a voiceover introduces the detective and talks about the crime in the city and the waste of life. The scene then changes to the detective walking the crime scene and ending his dialogue with a famous quote. The scene then fades to black and the credits appear.

Plot synopsis B
Character A (a girl) is stalked by character B dressed in black and is chased up a road as the scene is constantly intercut to show a detective running frantically to try and save the girl. There are quick cuts as the attack takes place and there is a voiceover as the detective turns up too late to save the girl. The scene then fades to black and the credits roll.